How can I improve this further? ( the arrangement, words, etc.)?
The second I walked in through the blue, freshly painted iron door, I felt nauseous. I was frozen in place, right between the classroom and the outside world, the world that I so longed to be in right now. I was early, just another face in the handful of children looking around the room in wonder, trying to figure out what the middle-aged woman in front of the room was saying in her Southern accent. Her eyes were a dazzling, bright blue; the color of the ocean when on a summer noon. Her dark brown hair was swept in a ponytail in a careless manner. She was wearing a light green skirt with sequins on it and a white collared shirt. Her style was plain, but it stood out like a rose among lilies. Her room was neat, with bright posters hung unsystematically on the wall. Her desk, unlike most teachers’, was not cluttered with students’ work. With big cursive letters, she had written “Welcome” on the board. That was all I needed to help me get through the day.
In between outside world and the world, I would put a hypin or a semi-colon.Other than that, it was very good and very well written.
 |
 18 Long Sequined Santa Stocking Felt Applique Kit 8124 $22.32 Time Remaining: 14h 11m Buy It Now for only: $22.32 |
 NEW Bucilla Embroidery Kit With Iron On Sequins Felt+ $8.99 Time Remaining: 16h Buy It Now for only: $8.99 |
 Design Works Felt Sequin Stocking Kit SANTA LIST $22.75 Time Remaining: 17h 1m Buy It Now for only: $22.75 |
 BUCILLA Sequined Felt Stocking Kit ELEGANT POINSETTIA New KIT $26.95 Time Remaining: 19h 6m Buy It Now for only: $26.95 |
 Christmas Fun Bears Sled Stocking Kit Iron On Transfer Sequin Felt Applique $16.99 Time Remaining: 1d 39m Buy It Now for only: $16.99 |
 Sleeping Santa Stocking Kit Iron On Transfer Sequin Felt Applique $16.99 Time Remaining: 1d 42m Buy It Now for only: $16.99 |
 Angel Angelas Star Sequin Felt Applique Stocking Kit $16.99 Time Remaining: 1d 49m Buy It Now for only: $16.99 |
 BUCILLA FELT POINSETTIA NAPKIN RINGS KIT APPLIQUE SEQUINS PKG $9.99 Time Remaining: 2d 7h 58m Buy It Now for only: $14.50 |
 JANLYNN DISNEY FAIRIES CHRISTMAS STOCKING KIT FELT SEQUINS LILY 2007 $12.99 Time Remaining: 2d 7h 58m Buy It Now for only: $17.50 |
 Bucilla POOH PIGLET EEYORE FELT ORNAMENTS KIT Sequins $7.64 Time Remaining: 2d 15h 44m Buy It Now for only: $7.64 |
 Sultana Chrismtas jeweled stocking Jack In the Box NIP felt sequin needlecraft $9.99 Time Remaining: 2d 23h 7m Buy It Now for only: $12.99 |
 VTG Bucilla TRIM A TREE Felt Christmas Ornament Kit 1993 Makes 75 SEQUINS $39.99 Time Remaining: 3d 1h 29m |
 Janlynn SING ALONG WITH SANTA ANIMALS SEQUIN FELT Christmas Stocking Kit MIP $21.99 Time Remaining: 3d 9h 14m Buy It Now for only: $21.99 |
 Vintage VOGART FELT SEQUINS Embroidery CHRISTMAS Ornament Kit + 3 extra kits $14.99 Time Remaining: 3d 9h 46m Buy It Now for only: $14.99 |
 Bucilla ELEGANT POINSETTIA SEQUINED FELT APPLIQUE Christmas Stocking Kit $26.99 Time Remaining: 3d 9h 52m Buy It Now for only: $26.99 |
 Bucilla SNOWMAN ANIMALS RABBIT SQUIRREL DEER SEQUINED FELT APPLIQUE Stocking Kit $24.99 Time Remaining: 3d 9h 59m Buy It Now for only: $24.99 |
 GARDENING SANTA BIRDS POINSETTIA TREE SEQUINED FELT Christmas Stocking Kit $24.99 Time Remaining: 3d 10h 6m Buy It Now for only: $24.99 |
 Felt Sequin Tree Skirt Kit TWAS NIGHT BEFORE CHRISTMA $49.60 Time Remaining: 3d 22h 5m Buy It Now for only: $49.60 |
 Bucilla Dickens Christmas Felt Sequins Stocking Kit $36.99 Time Remaining: 5d 2h 5m Buy It Now for only: $36.99 |
 NEW BUCILLA SANTA SNOWMEN FENCE 8 Felt Sequin Bead Ornament Kit Christmas NIP $41.49 Time Remaining: 5d 10h 2m Buy It Now for only: $41.49 |
 Whats New Cute Loot Poinsettia Sequin Felt Christmas Ornament Kit NIP $10.00 Time Remaining: 5d 14h 52m Buy It Now for only: $10.00 |
 Christmas STOCKING FELT Applique KITFROSTYSnowmanSequinsBeadsTrainer18 $32.50 Time Remaining: 5d 21h 48m Buy It Now for only: $32.50 |
 Christmas Felt Applique Stocking KitSEQUINED SNOWMANFrostyBirdSize 18 $39.95 Time Remaining: 5d 21h 49m Buy It Now for only: $39.95 |
 BUCILLA Jeweled Holiday Ornaments Stained Glass 48619 Christmas Felt Sequin $18.77 Time Remaining: 6d 1h 31m Buy It Now for only: $18.77 |
 Rare 2003 Bucilla Playdate Stocking Felt Sequins Beads New in Package $44.95 Time Remaining: 6d 10h 49m Buy It Now for only: $49.95 |
 LOT OF 8 CUTE LOOT SEQUIN FELT ORNAMENT KITSNIP $20.00 Time Remaining: 6d 11h 49m Buy It Now for only: $20.00 |
 Bucilla Felt Sequin Christmas at Santas 36 Round Tree Skirt Kit $25.00 Time Remaining: 6d 15h 55m |
 NOS Vtg BUCILLA FELT w SEQUINS 4 XMAS ORNAMENTS KIT 2822 Old Woman In The Shoe $9.99 (1 Bid) Time Remaining: 6d 16h 50m |
 NOS Vtg BUCILLA FELT w SEQUINS 4 XMAS ORNAMENTS KIT 2133 WIZARD OF OZ CHARACTER $29.95 Time Remaining: 6d 17h 17m Buy It Now for only: $39.95 |
 Bucilla Heirloom Santa and Reindeer Door Knob Cover Kit Makes 4 Felt Sequins $19.99 Time Remaining: 6d 18h 16m Buy It Now for only: $19.99 |
 Vtg BUCILLA Christmas CARD HOLDER Jeweled Felt Sequins KIT Santa UP THE CHIMNEY $12.99 Time Remaining: 6d 21h 5m Buy It Now for only: $12.99 |
 Design Works Christmas Stocking Kit Snowman with Top Hat Bead Sequin Felt NEW $17.99 Time Remaining: 6d 23h 27m Buy It Now for only: $17.99 |
 SEQUINED SANTA Felt Christmas Stocking Kit $17.99 Time Remaining: 7d 22h 2m Buy It Now for only: $17.99 |
 Bucilla Felt Stocking Kit Santa Rudolph Embroidery Appliqu Sequins UNOPENED $69.99 Time Remaining: 7d 23h 32m Buy It Now for only: $69.99 |
 Bucilla Felt Stocking Kit Tropical Santa Alex Torra Appliqu Sequin Beads 18 $79.99 Time Remaining: 7d 23h 42m Buy It Now for only: $79.99 |
 Bucilla Jeweled Birds Blossoms Sequined Felt Calendar Kit 1995 831000 MIP $15.95 Time Remaining: 8d 15h 56m Buy It Now for only: $15.95 |
 Bucilla Jeweled Bird Houses Birds Sequined Felt Calendar Kit 1995 83094 MIP $15.95 Time Remaining: 8d 16h 7m Buy It Now for only: $15.95 |
 VINTAGE 1977 LEEWARDS THE HOLY NIGHT FELT SEQUIN WALL HANGING NIP $22.50 Time Remaining: 9d 18h 55m Buy It Now for only: $22.50 |
 Santa Cat Felt Sequins Christmas Stocking Kit 16 $19.99 Time Remaining: 9d 23h 46m Buy It Now for only: $19.99 |
 Sequined Santa Stocking Felt Applique Kit 18 Inch Long $17.84 Time Remaining: 10d 3h 21m Buy It Now for only: $17.84 |
 Vintage Bucilla Needlepoint FELT Ornament KIT Christmas sequins SANTA CLAUS tbl $24.99 Time Remaining: 10d 8h 55m Buy It Now for only: $24.99 |
 1977 Lee Wards Letters to Santa Felt Art Sequins Kit 12 x 23 card Holder NEW $39.95 Time Remaining: 10d 15h 20m Buy It Now for only: $39.95 |
 Columbia Minerva Felt Sequin Ornament Christmas Kit New $5.99 Time Remaining: 10d 21h 33m Buy It Now for only: $5.99 |
 Sequin Felt REACH FOR THE STAR Xmas Stocking Kit New $19.99 Time Remaining: 11d 29m Buy It Now for only: $19.99 |
 Set 6 Be Jeweled Magnetic Hold Ups CHRISTMAS Ornaments Felt Floss Sequins Beads $77.92 Time Remaining: 11d 11h 50m Buy It Now for only: $77.92 |
 SNOWMAN Felt Applique Stocking Kit CHRISTMAS Felt Floss Sequins Beads Winter $77.92 Time Remaining: 11d 11h 50m Buy It Now for only: $77.92 |
 ROSE TREE 6 pieces Felt Applique Ornament Kit CHRISTMAS Felt Floss Sequins Beads $15.61 Time Remaining: 11d 11h 59m Buy It Now for only: $15.61 |
 NEW Bucilla Felt Sequin 18 LETTERS TO SANTA Christmas Stocking Kit $49.93 Time Remaining: 11d 20h 40m Buy It Now for only: $49.93 |
 Sealed 1986 Traditions Felt Ornaments Christmas Canadian Geese Sequins Beads $10.00 Time Remaining: 12d 12m Buy It Now for only: $10.00 |
 Sealed 1986 Traditions Felt Ornaments Reindeer Christmas Tree Sequins Beads $10.00 Time Remaining: 12d 12m Buy It Now for only: $10.00 |
 Bear Santa Felt Sequins X Mas Stocking Kit NIP 6 $8.00 Time Remaining: 12d 9h 45m Buy It Now for only: $8.00 |
 JANLYNN SANTAS SNOWFLAKE COLLECTION ORNAMENTS KIT XMAS FELT BEADS SEQUINS CRAFT $19.99 Time Remaining: 12d 15h 36m Buy It Now for only: $19.99 |
 Dimensions SEQUINED SANTA STOCKING Felt Applique Christmas Kit $24.99 Time Remaining: 12d 16h 47m Buy It Now for only: $24.99 |
 Bucilla STOCKING FELT Applique Christmas KitGLITTER GLITZLots of Sequins $48.75 Time Remaining: 12d 23h 8m Buy It Now for only: $48.75 |
 Felt Embroidery Kit Sequined Santa Claus Xmas Stocking $16.99 Time Remaining: 13d 12h 55m Buy It Now for only: $16.99 |
 Vtg Bucilla CHristmas Santa Sequin Felt Card Holder Kit $45.00 Time Remaining: 13d 14h 30m Buy It Now for only: $45.00 |
 Dimensions SEQUINED SANTA HOLLY STARS FELT APPLIQUE Christmas Stocking Kit $21.99 Time Remaining: 14d 9h 45m Buy It Now for only: $21.99 |
 Bucilla SANTA SNOWMAN FELT STOCKING KIT Sequins Beads Silent Night Singing $24.99 Time Remaining: 15d 3h 8m Buy It Now for only: $24.99 |
 Bucilla SUPER SANTA FELT ORNAMENTS KIT Sequins Beads $18.99 Time Remaining: 15d 3h 20m Buy It Now for only: $18.99 |
 Bucilla Set of 4 SANTA SNOWMAN FELT ORNAMENTS KIT Christmas Stockings Sequins $24.99 Time Remaining: 15d 4h 18m Buy It Now for only: $24.99 |
 Christmas Snowman Felt Sequins Embroidery Kit 11x17 $19.99 Time Remaining: 15d 21h 54m Buy It Now for only: $19.99 |
 NEW HOBBY CRAFT MINI FELT STOCKING WITH SEQUINS BEADS $4.99 Time Remaining: 15d 22h 51m Buy It Now for only: $4.99 |
 Felt Beads Sequin KIT OXMAS TREE STOCKING NIP Bucilla $28.99 Time Remaining: 16d 13h 13m Buy It Now for only: $28.99 |
 Christmas House Crafts Snowman Felt Stocking Kit Sequin CLEARANCE Item $7.50 Time Remaining: 18d 20h 24m Buy It Now for only: $7.50 |
 Bucilla Christmas Felt Sequin Jeweled Teddy Bear Stocking Ornament Kit NEW $42.50 Time Remaining: 19d 11h 40m Buy It Now for only: $42.50 |
 Bucilla Christmas Felt Applique Ornament KitWHIMSICAL SNOWMENSequinsSet of 4 $24.95 Time Remaining: 19d 15h 44m Buy It Now for only: $24.95 |
 Bucilla Felt Sequins Beads Christmas Ornament Kit All Bent Up makes 12 $14.99 Time Remaining: 19d 22h 9m Buy It Now for only: $14.99 |
 Paragon THE STOCKINGETTES FELT ORNAMENTS KIT Sequins Stockings Reindeer Bags $19.99 Time Remaining: 20d 18h 44m Buy It Now for only: $19.99 |
 Bucilla felt Applique Christmas stocking Golfing Santa Golf sequins NEW 1996 $49.99 Time Remaining: 20d 23h 51m Buy It Now for only: $49.99 |
 Vtg Bucilla Christmas Mail Bag 16x25 FELT sequin KIT $35.00 Time Remaining: 22d 13h 37m Buy It Now for only: $35.00 |
 1989 FELT CALENDAR KIT New in Package Sequins Beads $9.99 Time Remaining: 22d 18h 46m Buy It Now for only: $9.99 |
 NEW Bucilla A VISIT FROM SANTA STOCKING KIT Felt Sequin Bead Toys Christmas Tree $24.99 Time Remaining: 23d 17h 35m Buy It Now for only: $24.99 |
 Vintage Bucilla Card Holder Felt Sequins RARE Company Completed Kit Unused $49.99 Time Remaining: 24d 11h 2m Buy It Now for only: $49.99 |
 Bucilla A LIST FOR SANTA FELT STOCKING KIT Sequins Bead $29.74 Time Remaining: 24d 15h 20m Buy It Now for only: $29.74 |
 Storybook Felt Stocking Hobby Kraft Santa Embroidery Kit Sequins Beads NIP $10.00 Time Remaining: 24d 15h 51m Buy It Now for only: $10.00 |
 84394 BUCILLA WHIMSICAL SNOWMEN SEQUINED FELT ORNAMENT KIT BONNIE SMITH NIP $27.95 Time Remaining: 24d 20h 12m Buy It Now for only: $27.95 |
Leave a Reply